Argument/Thesis: As suggested by the GTA and the peer, I need to keep focus on the main points of argument which is the criticality of the Chinese and Roman government. The first paragraph starting with, “Before the discussion and the comparison….. are reflected here”, needs to be omitted and instead the quotations from the philosophies of individuals will be added. The thesis statement will be as follows: The Chinese government formed the based with the government rules and policies whereas Roman government supported the influence of feudalism.